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Reading Reviews - April 2004
Familiar Flowers:
By Tim Yu
There's something profoundly nerdy about showing up early for a poetry reading, but I had a feeling it was going to be necessary for Robert Creeley. The reading had shifted from its usual long-hall, chairs-on-the-floor setting of Classics 10 to the auditorium setting of Social Sciences 122, which seats around 150, but by the time I walked through the door at 5:15 the place was already packed and I just barely managed to squeeze into a seat in the fourth row. By the time the reading started--at 5:30 sharp--people were crouching in the aisles and standing three deep in the open doorway. I even saw a few people standing outside in the cold, ears pressed against the slightly opened windows.
Robert von Hallberg provided a fine introduction, hitting on precisely that
balance of forces that makes Creeley's work so powerful and appealing: its
ability to be somehow both utterly plain and richly, almost agonizingly
allusive, and suggesting a development from Creeley's early desire to
articulate a generational consciousness to his more recent interest in
finding a more broadly shared consciousness--or, as Creeley would put it
several times during the reading, a "company."
Creeley came to the podium with a copy of Fanny Howe's "The Wedding Dress"
and opened with a selection from Howe's "Bewilderment" that evoked the image
of the "sleeping witness" who "feels safe enough to lie down in mystery"--an
image Creeley likened to Keastian negative capability, and to Franz Kline's
quip, "I paint what I don't know." "I have nothing to say," Creeley
insisted; what's interesting, then, is to see "what still insists on being
said."
Creeley had a copy of his selected poems but only cracked it open a few times, sticking mostly to new or recent work. I think Creeley's work of the '60s and '70s is absolutely indispensable--I can't imagine where I'd be without it--but I've had a hard time knowing what to do with his poetry since the '80s; his enjambments have seemed less hard-edged and his rhythms less infallible. His poetry's always risked banality, but in his best work simplicity turns into a kind of minimalism or abstraction; I've found some of his recent work, though, veering a bit toward the sentimental. Perhaps this is simply a product of achieving what Creeley called "a comfortably advanced age"; I think you can see something a bit similar happening in Ashbery's recent work, which continues to come out at a remarkable clip as his lines get shorter and shorter and his syntax less and less complex.
In person, though, Creeley's utterly convincing. I've seen him read three
times now, and he always manages to keep his audiences rapt, moving
seamlessly from poem to poetics to patter; he's one of the few poets whose
reading actually profoundly illuminates the work--his sometimes abrupt
linebreaks just seem to map the contours of his voice. He's an avuncular
presence, coming in a comfortable blue sweater and jeans and even, Mr.
Rogers style, removing the sweater before he started to read, and frequently
smoothing back his hair or rubbing his brow as if slightly perplexed by his
own words.
The first poem he read, "Possibilities," had everything I've been talking
about going on; it had Creeley's typically constrained vocabulary, leaning
on repetitions (each / each, all / all), slight permutations in wording, and
corny rhymes (here / near / dear). But rather than making these a personal
statement, the poem worked to push these into the impersonal: "One
wanted...One says...One heard of a thoughtless moment." If a lot of early
Creeley seemed to be about picking apart individual subjectivity, showing
how agonizing it was for the "I" to try to say anything at all, late Creeley
is more interested in the shared and collective, how "nothing's apart from
all"--a sentiment, Creeley noted at the poem's conclusion, that stands
against the current tendency toward "separation into bits and pieces."
These gestures
toward common experience continued throughout the reading, at times doing a
little classic-rock channeling: "Everybody's child walks the same winding
road," "Two is still one--it cannot live apart." But the most affecting
moments were grounded in an awareness of age and an ironic resistance to
claiming age as a position of wisdom; we got Creeley's one-sentence "Burnt
Norton"--"the old garden with its old familiar flowers"--and Beckettian
reduction of life's objects, with, of course, Creeley's all-American
automotive twist: "ring, dog, hat, car." A piece portentously called
"Memory" turned out to be a loose stand-up routine, with Creeley recounting
in painful detail his urologist's instructions on how to "squeeze out the
last drops of pee" by hand, the weird stares this got him in public
bathrooms, and finally a reference, of course, to "On Golden Pond." He also
noted his alarm when his dentist began telling him, "Well, that should hold
you."
The power of Creeley's method might have been most evident, though, in his
final poem, "John's Song" (a title that of course recalls Creeley's most
famous poem, "I Know a Man": "John, I / sd, which was not his / name"),
which consisted almost entirely of repetitions of and variations on two
phrases: "If ever / there is...other than war."
Poem Present - University of Chicago
By Ela Kotkowska
I had never heard Bob Creeley read before. “Bob,” definitely “Bob,” for “Robert” was Duncan yesterday, and Bob, seated on the table-top, microphone wire and “how do you turn this on; now you can hear me!” The room was packed. Social Sciences building of the academic fortress, number 122 and perhaps as many in the audience; perhaps twenty three more, plus a few others out there in the cold, their ears pressed to the sound-leaking windows. “On the way, so to speak, I was reading this, The Wedding Dress…” The poem opening Fanny Howe’s collection “could sum up my whole approach to poetry.” “I have nothing to say, I have nothing to say.” “This character called I” speaks in his poems as Creeley sits by in wonderment at being a poet.
My mother just on edge
of unexpected death the
fact of one operation over
successful says, it’s all
free Bob! You don’t
have to pay for any of it!
Life, like. Waiting for the train.
Life, like. Train, true, poetry, like, passes. “Tout passe?” Bob’s voice, and I never heard him read before, sounds as I’ve always heard him, there, breathstop, never short of amazement. Laugh, like. “How are we on time?” “May never come back, right?” “I had this poem I sent to Robert Duncan. He liked it better than I did. I didn’t really want him to respond. Always appreciated his sparse remarks. Where is it? See, I disliked it so much it’s not here.” How else to write, if not
myself in the time and place
writing words which I knew,
could say ring, dog, hat, car,
was rushing, it felt, to keep up
Aside the rudeness of erudition, words as simple as, what is seen what heard. I am curious, of the one hundred and twenty-two or more, how many, hearing a poet speak, by chance and for the first time, turn to poetry? A few hours later, at 57th Street Books, three girls fumble towards the high C’s. And another poem, “as you see, I write much to order.” Poem for the occasion, an occasional poem: what’s the difference? A poet writes, in his place, put, there, always. “Life is the river / we’ve carried with us.” The canvas by Francesco Clemente should be spread on the blackboard behind his back or, better yet, their four courners folded into the poem, they’re here, “inside my head.” Things are simple; so simple, perhaps, as to go without saying. But then:
Wet
water
warm
fire.
Rough
wood
cold
stone.
Hot
coals
shining
star.
Physical hill still my will.
Mind’s absence alters all.
“Was this a real poem or did you write it yourself?”
Rock me, boat.
Open, open.
Hold me,
little cupped hand.
Let me come in,
come on
board you, sail
off, sail off…
“Rock me, boat, I have no idea what that means.” “I have not elaborated the form apparently mine to write in.” At the next turn of a page, a water-filled plastic cup, knocked down, lands upright with hardly a spill. Where does a poem start and where does it end? And then there’s the poem on the skill of peeing, not an easy thing, and old age comes without a user’s manual. Nothing to be left out, “I write of things I don’t know.”
So, I heard Bob Creeley read. What else can I say? Etc.